Hi Everyone,
Well here it is my first attempt at my professional Profile. Any advice on how to improve would be great. I think for my next version i will write it more personal about me instead of bullet pointing it. After reading others i feel it lacks personality but my reason for doing a bulletpoint version was to make it more eye appealing in the hope more would take the time to read it .......I look forward to seeing what you all think.Thank you,
Michelle
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Hi Michelle,
ReplyDeleteI found your piece really interesting to read and most importantly was really impressed by all your fabulous credentials. However, I did feel that I was reading a CV rather than a Professional Profile. As you mentioned yoruself it is really clear to read and understand, but I think this would be a great layout for a CV. I agree with you that it could use a little more of a personal touch and try to think of it as a piece of writing rather than list format. I think the idea is that you let the reader feel they are getting to know you and your journey so far. I hope this helps :)
Hi Jo,
ReplyDeleteThgank you for your advice, I agree with you.... I'll get started on the 2nd draft
Thanks again
Michelle :)